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Tuesday, 28 July 2020

Writing task

W.A.L.T create a blog post explaining our writing task for today.


For writing today, we had to write a descriptive writing. First we had to plan the object we were doing, by writing the 5 senses (Tastes, smells, looks, sounds, feels) then write a descriptive writing for out object. I decided to do a mouse, cause I thought it would be fun to fill out the plan. Here is my plan:























What did I do well?
I did well on writing the senses, I came up with words to write pretty quickly.

What could I improve on?
I think I could've done more descriptive and better adjective words.

How will I use this in my writing?
I will use by adding these senses into my writing to make it a 'descriptive writing. Example: "A mouse is feels soft and smooth"

Reflection on what I enjoyed:
I enjoyed thinking of words to write down, I could write whatever I wanted and be creative. My favourite senses to write about was 'looks'. I could I imagine a cute mouse and then write everything what it looked like. I am very excited to write my descriptive writing!

What animal would've you written?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mia,
    Frances here. I like how you added an example to the sentence where you explain how you will use this in your writing. You did a good job on this blog, and I did a dog for the animal I wrote a plan about. Keep up the good work Mia!

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